Tuesday, January 30, 2007

Descriptive Paragraph (Dread)

Descriptive Paragraph (Dread)
Something that I dread is death. The reason that I fear death is because I’m not sure what’s going to happen to me, where I’m going to go or how. I’m scared that there’s a beautiful place where everyone is happy and no one has any worries called heaven and I’m going to stay here in earth. I’m also scared of going to the worse place ever with all these mean and ugly people were nothing other than evil exists. Hell will be a really bad place to go. It’s not only what’s after death that I fear but also the way I die. I wonder if I’m just going to go to a deep sleep and never wake up or if someone’s going to kill me with no regrets or if I’m going to get really sick and die or if I’m going to suffer while I die. I’m scared of everything about death I imagine death coming toward me in a very dark room and I just run as fast as I can until my legs get really weak and death comes and gets me. I wish death will never come for me.

2 comments:

Kevin Gudino said...

whoa! candy great job you really describe the feeling of death and how much you fear it, i thought that was pretty pimp. ;)

Austin Han said...

I like how you used so many adj. to discribe such a simple thing like death you could have done it in a couple of sentences but you wrote about a pargaraph long