Descriptive Writing Assignment (Dread Blogs)

Descriptive Writing Assignment (Dread Blogs)
Descriptive Words On My Dread Blog:
1. Evil-It’s a scary word and it describes how the place is.
2. Dark- It gives you an example of how the place is.
3. Weak- This was a good word in the sentence because it was descriptive and it was better than just saying tired.
Descriptive Words On Group Dread Blogs:
1. Austin I liked this paragraph because you have no clue what you hate until you get to the end. For example at first I thought it was a pencil but then I figured it was a book. Bad Smell- this was descriptive because it used the 5 senses.
2. Daniel I liked this blog because it is very descriptive you have really good words in here. And you had the 5 senses witch helped me imagine and feel what was going on. Also I liked your topic I think fear itself was very good.
Ice Cubes - I liked this simile because instead of saying it was cold ice cubes made it seem more realistic and interesting.
3. Kevin your blog was very good it was very descriptive. Even though your never going to get a date with Jessica Alba or Pamela Anderson you can keep on dreaming. I liked how you used similes like nails scratching on chalkboard instead of a bad noise. I also liked the noises you used like “BEEP, CRUNCH, BLAH, AND WAKE UP”